WRITING A FILM NOIR SCENE

2. Police department background. Superimpose:

(credits)

3. Int. Police Department – Morning/Lunch – Establishing shot.

It is midday. Establishing shot of the office door.

4. Inside the detectives office. Detective Mark Webb is sitting in his desk with Mrs. Johnson whos walking around the room.

Mrs. Johnson (Sarah)

Oh detective I really need your help.

She moves from the minibar (where the alcohol is) to the desk and sits in Marks lap

Mark

I love it when you make that silly voice of yours sweety.

(Mrs. Johnson Gigles)

Mrs. Johnoson (starts playing with his tie and hums a sweet song)

Mark (Kisses her on the forehead)

Mrs. Johnson 

When are we going to be toguether?

Mark (silly tone)

When your husband dies?

KNOCKS ON THE DOOR

Mark

Come in Rosey!

Roosey (opens the door and leaves a tiny space to pass only his head through.

Sir, a client is here to see you. He doesnt have an appointment but he looks despertate

Detective

Ok, ok, whats his name?

Rosey

Mr. Jonhson, Jerry Johnson,

Detective

Ok, tell him to wait a minute.

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Production Journal

In this second week of production, our editor was able to edit 1:30 of B-Role footage,which is great and also our PE says we are ahead of the class which is great. We have all done an excellent work because Manuel was absent and we all replaced him for the time that he was absent to class and we all were very compromised.

Also I with the help of Ernesto where able to compose a serious of questions, 10 good and eloquent questions.This questions where perfect for a documentary because the most  important thing is not the question, but it is the answers we get from the general population.

Our editor and and I were working on the shot list and with exactitude places we are going to be shooting and places we shall may scout. This is a very important step for the group to have an idea of what we re going to do.

As an overall, my conclusion of the group is that we are trying to the best of our potential some more than others, but we are employing all our skills on this project and also the more important learning in the process, after all this is our first time on the topic, even doe we are tying to be the more professionals as we can be.