WRITING A FILM NOIR SCENE

2. Police department background. Superimpose:

(credits)

3. Int. Police Department – Morning/Lunch – Establishing shot.

It is midday. Establishing shot of the office door.

4. Inside the detectives office. Detective Mark Webb is sitting in his desk with Mrs. Johnson whos walking around the room.

Mrs. Johnson (Sarah)

Oh detective I really need your help.

She moves from the minibar (where the alcohol is) to the desk and sits in Marks lap

Mark

I love it when you make that silly voice of yours sweety.

(Mrs. Johnson Gigles)

Mrs. Johnoson (starts playing with his tie and hums a sweet song)

Mark (Kisses her on the forehead)

Mrs. Johnson 

When are we going to be toguether?

Mark (silly tone)

When your husband dies?

KNOCKS ON THE DOOR

Mark

Come in Rosey!

Roosey (opens the door and leaves a tiny space to pass only his head through.

Sir, a client is here to see you. He doesnt have an appointment but he looks despertate

Detective

Ok, ok, whats his name?

Rosey

Mr. Jonhson, Jerry Johnson,

Detective

Ok, tell him to wait a minute.

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